PAE Professional Academic EnglishChapter 20 · New
Polish · Chapter 20 · New for this edition

Writing in the
age of AI.

Pretending AI isn't here is denial; using it without thinking is dishonesty. The honest position sits in the middle, and it's learnable.

Matthew Clement · Careercomms.comWorkbook pages 87 to 90
PAE Professional Academic EnglishCh 20 · Why this matters

One question survives every model update.

The tools change every few months. The question doesn't:

Whose thinking is on the page?

The honest test

If the thinking is yours, with AI as an assistant, the essay is yours. If it's the model's, with you as the typist, it isn't, and your reader will figure that out.

Part one

Permitted.
Conditional.
Forbidden.

Three categories sort almost every use. Knowing which box you're in, before you open the model, is the whole discipline.

Workbook · Chapter 20Page 87
PAE Professional Academic EnglishCh 20.1 · Three categories

Know the box before you prompt.

CategoryWhat it looks likeWhat to do
PermittedBrainstorming. Grammar checks. Critique of a paragraph you wrote. Explaining a concept from your sources.Use freely. Declare it.
ConditionalGenerating an outline. Summarising a source. Sample sentences in a discipline style.Verify every claim. Declare each use.
ForbiddenGenerating paragraphs you submit unchanged. Inventing citations. Writing the thesis or the analysis.Don't. This is misconduct.
The cardinal rule

Write the sentence. Then ask the model to critique it.

Never the reverse. Ask the model first and you've outsourced the thinking. Write first and the model is your editor, a role it does well.

Talk about it · 6 minutes

Where is your personal line between using AI and outsourcing the thinking?

  •   Name one use you'd call permitted, and one forbidden.
  •   Would you be comfortable declaring it to the professor?
  •   If the model vanished tomorrow, could you still write the essay?
Part two

How any reader
can tell.

Machine-drafted prose has a signature. Once you can hear it, you can hear it in your own draft, and increasingly, so can the software.

Workbook · Chapter 20Page 89
PAE Professional Academic EnglishCh 20.7 · Six tells

Read this. Then name what's wrong.

In today's rapidly evolving digital landscape, Coupang's competitive edge is a multifaceted one requiring careful consideration of various interrelated factors. The company has leveraged its unique strengths, agility, adaptability, and innovation, to deliver a seamless, personalised experience that resonates deeply with consumers.
  • A “rapidly evolving landscape” opener
  • Triads, “agility, adaptability, innovation”
  • Every noun pre-glazed with an idle adjective
  • No number, no source, nothing checkable
  • Would fit any company in any country
  • Uniform, frictionless, empty confidence
The hallucinated citation

If a model gave you the citation, it doesn't exist.

The author looks right. The journal exists. The DOI won't resolve. Treat every model-suggested source as a lead, not a citation, open the database and verify it yourself, or it's fabrication.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishCh 20.2 · The AI Statement

Declare it like a methods note.

End every essay with a one-paragraph AI Statement under the references. It isn't a confession, it's a transparency note.

AI Statement · example

ChatGPT was used for three purposes. (1) Brainstorming counter-arguments before I drafted that paragraph. (2) Flagging unclear sentences, which I then rewrote myself. (3) Explaining a difficult passage in Jin (2022), verified against the original. No sentences were generated by the model; all citations were checked against the sources.

It doesn't excuse improper use, and it does become part of the record, so an honest statement always beats a discovered understatement.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishCh 20.5–20.6 · Prompts

Five to use. Five to avoid.

Memorise these
  • “Which sentences would a reader find unclear?”
  • “List the strongest objections to my thesis.”
  • “Where is my conclusion stronger than my evidence?”
  • “Do these topic sentences form a coherent argument?”
Never these
  • “Write me an essay on…”
  • “Give me five academic sources on…”
  • “Rewrite this so it sounds smarter.”
  • “Make this thesis stronger.”
Part three

Now you
try it.

Sort seven real uses into the three boxes, then test whether the sources a model hands you actually exist.

Workbook · Chapter 20Page 90 · Exercises 20.1 to 20.3
PAE Professional Academic EnglishIn class · Exercise
EX. 20.1

Categorise the use

Decide · 6 min

Permitted, conditional, or forbidden?

ScenarioPerm.Cond.Forbid.
A stronger verb for a sentence I wrote.
Three objections to my draft thesis.
Write the introduction in my voice.
Summarise a long PDF before I read it.
Five citations to support my thesis.
Then verify

Ask a model for three 2022+ sources on your topic and click each DOI. In most class tests, one in three is fabricated.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishChapter 20 · Recap

The chapter in one slide.

  • The test that lasts: whose thinking is on the page?
  • Permitted, conditional, forbidden, know the box first
  • Write the sentence, then ask the model to critique it
  • Machine prose has tells: triads, glaze, no evidence
  • Model-suggested citations are leads, verify or drop them
  • Declare every use in an honest AI Statement
In the workbook

Chapter 20, pages 87 to 90, including the three-paragraph A/B/C comparison, the prompt banks, the six tells, and Exercises 20.1 to 20.3 (including a real source-verification test).

Whose thinking
is on the page?

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